Friday, November 19, 2010

Chapter 3

Adam received some quizzical looks as the raptor looked down upon him. Then something surprising happened. It started to stomp on the edges of the pit! It was trying to collapse the pit and bury him alive! Adam went into a panic! He tried to scramble up the edges, but to no with no success. He pounded on the wall in frustration and started to say his prayers. Just then an invisible door in the wall open and an old man's head poked out. "Ey, whats with all the noise." He said . Just then he saw the raptor. And then Adam. A look of confusion flew across his face. Then it disappeared. He then ushered Adam inside. Through the window Adam saw the raptor walk away. He could almost see the look of disappointment on its face. Then he blacked out.

2 comments:

  1. Love the suspense created when Adam fill into the pit. I especially like the image you created with the raptor trying to collapse the pit and bury Adam alive. I look with anticipation to your next chapter when we find out about the mysterious old man.

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